Poetry: Whispers of Fall in Paradise

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The poem “Whispers of Fall in Paradise” perfectly captures that feeling we get in September as we start to look forward to the holidays, even in sunny Hawaii. It’s all about those little shifts that happen when summer begins to fade. You can almost feel a cool breeze come in, hinting that something special is on the way. The golden sunsets and the beautiful tropical blooms make everything feel extra magical, and the delicious scents of spices remind us of cozy gatherings ahead. The poem paints a picture of warmth and connection, showing that even without the traditional changing of leaves, the excitement for the holidays is alive and well in our hearts. It’s all about embracing that festive spirit, no matter where you are!


Whispers of Fall in Paradise

In September’s grace, a subtle shift occurs.
Warm sunbeams meet the ocean’s rippling blue.
In Hawaii’s embrace, palm trees sway gently.
A whisper of change beckons us today.

Golden sunsets melt across the bright sky.
Gentle breezes dance beneath the twilight.
Though seasons blend in this island’s fold,
A chill in the air tells tales yet untold.

The sea’s scent mixes with hints of spice.
It reminds us of gatherings, warm and nice.
Laughter crashes like waves on the shore.
The magic of holidays knocks at our door.

Exotic blooms nod softly in fading light,
As starlit skies wrap the approaching night.
Each moment that passes brings the season’s call.
A longing for harvest, joy for us all.

Though leaves may not flutter in vibrant array,
We embrace the spirit that brightens our day.
Warm cocoa cups share a sweet lover’s tease.
Hawaii’s heart finds gentle ease.

Here in our haven, we wait and we dream,
For the season’s enchantment, a soft, bright gleam.
With love in our hearts and joy in our sight,
We welcome the magic of each season’s light.

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  1. Lincol Martín Avatar

    What a beautiful poem. You manage to convey the essence of Hawaii with a warmth that makes the transition of the seasons feel like a whisper full of magic and hope.

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    1. Keito + Kanvas Avatar

      Thanks so much! I’m really glad you felt the magic and warmth of Hawaii in the poem. It means a lot to hear that!

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  2. nushhe Avatar

    beautiful poem! I love how you expressed summers in a metaphorical way

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    1. Keito + Kanvas Avatar

      Thanks so much! I’m glad you enjoyed the poem and the metaphors—I had fun writing it! 🌞✨

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  3. veerites Avatar

    Dear Keito
    While watching the most wonderful 4k Czech channels, I turned my head, read your wonderful post & muted.
    Thanks for liking my post, Technology 😍❤️🙏

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  4. pk 🌎 Avatar

    A wonderful sharing ❤️

    Grettings regards 🌎🇪🇦

    Happy saturday 🌞

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